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System Failure (Geek Actually #1.12)

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System Failure (Geek Actually #1.12)

Penned By Cecilia Tan
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Thank you to everyone who pointed out that a trigger warning would be appreciated in this episode. We are truly grateful for your feedback and will be inserting warnings.~Please be aware this episode contains scenes depicting sexual assault and harassment that some readers may find triggering~Meet your new best girlfriends. Michelle is a hard-nosed Science Fiction editor who is used to things going her way; Taneesha is a talented video game programmer who is used to being the odd (wo)man out. Aditi is a fantasy writer on the verge of her big break; Christina is a rebel on the sidelines of Hollywood. And Elli is a fan – of anything and everything that keeps are from “proper adulting.” Together they are Rebel Scum (at least in their shared group chat), and best friends through thick and thin. They might live far apart but through the power of the internet and a shared love of all things geek, they are ready to face the world side by side.This is the 12th episode in the first season of Geek Actually, a 13-episode serial from Serial Box Publishing. This episode was written by Cecilia Tan.

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Length 46 Pages
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Released August 23, 2017
Identifier (ISBN) 34743796
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Cecilia Tan writes contemporary fiction and has always been fascinated by character-driven stories. They hold a degree in English Literature and previously worked as an editor before transitioning to writing their own books. Cecilia Tan lives with their spouse and a very vocal rescue cat.

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